| With tears im my eyes My vision may be blurred I am shaken Though not stirred Shaken from my dreams, my beliefs And what I was lured Into thinking was my destiny. I hear the joy and happiness Calling out loud to me But something that had been Would not let go of me, I pray hard to have The strength to set free And run to where i belong. I have had my share Of sorrow, deceit and lies Its time for me to fly now Fly high into the clear blue skies Being where i should And doing what i want No more heart-broken cries I shut my eyes tight The tear drops down kissing my cheek I open my eyes now And can see a magical light There is nothing left of what should not be, Now I wipe that tear alright- I know i am just Shaken not stirrred. |
Saturday, February 10, 2007
Shaken Not Stirred...
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faaaack..its awesome!
I really am speechless for this...its like it shadows my beliefs that relations hurt... dont let anyone come so close that it gives the person to coz turmoil in ur life.. Its ur life live it ur way for urself... one can be complete with oneself...
sorry sweets this has just zapped me...
FANTASTIC! girl, u've left me speechless...
keep writing such soul-stirring poetry...:)
beautifully written
i knw u wil be expectn loads of galis frm me fr tis poem..bt lemme gve u a suprise..d main reason fr me nt liking tis poem much was tat it made u remem ur past n sme past of m life also..bt thn tis poem has loads of meaning in it..ppl who has been thru tis phrase of life cn undrstnd tis poem nd relate to it...nd u wth ur thnkn nd writing skills hve executed tis poem very well..im really pround of ya..very well done !! bt thn u hve to remem 1 thng tat watever has gone is gone ,it is PAST..so stp livn in ur past n start njoyn ur present n gt ready fr ur beautiful future..coz not everythng in tis world betrays us..
so keep up d gud wrk..!! god bless ya..
gawd....!luv all u guys for this..never actually thot u guys wud bliv d idea of me ritin poetry!
yeah dis 1 has sum sad memories bt i promis gud stuff wud follow.. sply u shyamantika..yhnk u 4 dis 1..!
and yes i would like you guys 2 atleast display ur name so tht i acn say thank u!
yup!!!!!!
gud very gud!!!!
i'hv sum wordz for ya...........
tl ya whn time cumes********
carry on writing poemz.........
Adi.
very inspiring
hey ppl..
dis poem is jst rly close 2 my heart so it feels pretty gr8 dt u guys chkd it out n appreciated dis..
n adi im still waitin for d word dt u hv kept in store 4 me.. n sriya im glad u find dis inspirin...
:) well it sure is..i think one of the best here ! u shud post more...have u recently started writing? Or have u always?
and do not take my comments on the other posts to heart please...i really liked the poems that is why i read them,all i was doin was suggesting but i think you don't appreciate that ...so i shall refrain :) anyway ..do keep writing! And feel free to comment on my posts if u want ..i just posted somethin new !
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